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Sunday, October 24, 2010

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(Click VRIN, under Categories, to see all uploaded chapters)
This novel is available in print, and was a finalist in Operation First Novel 2007,
sponsored by Tyndale House Publishers.
Copyright © 2010 Amlin Publishing. All rights reserved.

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VRIN: ten mortal gods





CHAPTER 2
A REUNION OF SORTS
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After some time I sat forward; I had come to a conclusion. Although the events occurring were preposterous, it was apparent that I was in fact a part of them. And unless by some stroke of fortune I should wake to find this all a dream, I was going to have to dig to find some answers. Looking about, I took note that my vision had stabilized. That at least was a good sign. I stood, hoping the landscape beyond the wind-tossed curtains might jog my memory-- but I didn't make it to the window. Instead a full length mirror caught my eye and I was irresistibly drawn to it. Would I recognize the face staring back at me?
I stepped in front of the glass and could not believe what I saw. My eyes! They were glowing! Even with my memory loss, I was sure my eyes had never looked like this before. I moved in closer to examine them. They were cold and hard like steel, a deep blue color, strangely absent of irises or pupils. I experienced an involuntary shudder. Is it true? Cautiously I raised my hand to touch one, then the other. I poked at them until tears soaked my cheeks. I didn't know how, but they were real. I let out a cynical laugh; some god I was, confused and paranoid.
For several moments I stood quietly observing the curious stranger looking back at me. Aside from the eyes, I appeared to be a fairly ordinary twenty-something, with black hair, dark eyebrows, and slightly darkened skin. I was of Italian descent but there was something else thrown in there as well. My clothes were basic: hard cotton shirt, blue jeans, a pair of brown climbing sneakers. Coiled around my left pinkie was a gold ring, curious, but quite unremarkable. There was nothing impressive about my visage. I looked like an ordinary guy-- with glowing blue ball bearings for eyes.
I pulled my gaze away and proceeded toward the window. Careful to avoid the shards of broken glass I stepped over the sill and out onto the balcony. The wind tugged lightly at my clothing.
Below, a beautiful lawn with large flower beds encircled by rock spread out before me. In the distance, three moons hovered above the horizon, shedding an eerie blue blanket on the dark silhouettes of the night. In the center of the yard a statue of a woman stood opening her arms to the heavens. The workmanship was breathtaking, every detail captured precisely. Whatever this place was, it was beautiful.
At the edge of lawn a line of trees danced in the wind. As I stood staring at them a strange feeling washed over me. As if I were a part of the dance. I began swaying back and forth to their slow rhythm. And the wind grew stronger. Nature itself was moving to the beat of my heart and the world was alive around me. I could feel its power soaking into my skin and permeating my senses.
I longed to be walking along the path which twisted away just beyond the flower beds when suddenly a burst of energy coursed through me and I found myself surrounded by thin blue strands. They traveled away from me in every direction. Oddly enough, however, I was not shocked by their presence. Somehow I knew it was my will that had brought them to life, and instinctively I knew their purpose.
Caught up in the chain of events, my body responded to the force of my will, my essence melted into the strand that would bring me to the path, and with a crackle of energy, I found myself standing on the spot I had wanted to be. The wind brushed harder against my face. The sweet smell of flowers filled my nostrils.
I turned and looked back up at the balcony. The strand I had used was still floating in the air. The others had vanished, but this one still had a glow to it.
It seemed Mr. Barrows had been correct, I did possess some sort of power. I wanted to be on the path and the threads had reacted to my will. I looked around. Could I consciously control the threads? I spotted a small rock. Be an egg, I thought. There was no response. I increased my concentration and felt another energy burst. It started from behind my eyes and worked its way down to my hands. I waved my arms back and forth. Although I couldn't see the threads, I knew they were there; my arms tingled as they passed through them. Then all at once the web was alight once again.
I looked down at the rock. Like everything else it got its shape from the blue threads, which acted like an internal skeleton or a wire cage. The colors and textures of the rock were wrapped around this framework. Using the energy emanating from my hands I tried to bend the wire structure. I touched a nearby thread, closed my eyes, and pictured a sphere. Energy left my hands and when I looked down, the rock was completely round.
The web faded away-- and there I stood, smiling at my creation.
"Deep in thought?"
I looked up to see a beautiful young Asian woman, perhaps in her late teens or early twenties. Immediately I found myself drawn into her eyes. They were exquisite, like two blue embers casting a soft film of sapphire across her lovely features. They were similar to my own, only much brighter. My gaze drifted downward. Her tiny form was distinct under the thin colorful fabric of the dress which fluttered slightly in the wind. She was absolutely breathtaking.
"Who..." was all I managed to utter, followed by open mouthed speechlessness.
A chuckle escaped her lips. "Who am I?"
"Yes, ah... That was what I was hoping to say."
"Well. Who are you?" she asked playfully.
"N- no one of consequence."
She straightened and gave a smirk. "Humble-- for a god."
"A god. Yeah..."
She began to back away.
"About that..."
"You should not be in such a rush to find answers. You may miss the moment. And this moment is going to be like nothing you have ever experienced." Her eyes sparkled. "Want to have some fun?"
She did not wait for an answer, but turned and bolted down the path. "Follow me!"
There seemed to be no other option. I looked back at the mansion. No one else was around. She was my best chance to find answers. I burst into a run.
Her braided ponytail swung gracefully behind her and her soft black shoes made padded thumps on the stone pathway. Each side of the path was adorned with manicured shrubs which acted as walls. In some spots they formed archways crossing overhead. I was surprised to find myself enjoying the exercise; her playfulness set me at ease.
When we emerged from the path we found ourselves on the edge of a steep cliff overlooking a large expanse of blue ocean. Far below, a village sparkled on the water's edge. Millions of tiny reflections danced on the distant waves, like fireflies playing in the moonlight.
"That's Trinador!" The wind blew at her words. "It is my village! I built it from the power of the web! Would you like to see it?" She looked absolutely magnificent silhouetted against the night sky, her delicate oriental curves were highlighted in the soft moonlight which played upon her garments as they rippled in the wind.
I couldn't imagine wanting to be anywhere else but with her.
"Sure! Why not?" I hollered back. "How do we get down there?"
Her eyes twinkled. "Fly, silly!"
And with that she fell backwards over the edge.
In reflex I grabbed for her, then scrambled to see her plummeting to her death toward the jagged rocks below. I didn't want to watch but was frozen in horror.
With violence her arms snapped wide and caught the vibrating wind in the fabric of her dress. With a graceful sweep she rose up in an arc-- and hovered before me.
I stared in open-mouthed amazement.
"Come on!" She laughed. "Don't just stand there gawking!"
I marveled at the scene before me: the young woman soaring through the air with graceful movements, her form melting into the peaceful backdrop of the twinkling village. She was completely at ease floating in the currents of the wind and there was an expression of total freedom on her face.
Suddenly I felt invincible. I looked down at the rocky coast far below-- but it didn't frighten me. I could sense its curves in the power of the web. With a thought I could easily turn the rocks into sponges. I could change the direction or the strength of the wind. I could do whatever I wanted. In this world, I was in control. Somehow I was now sure of this. And whatever doubts I may have had, evaporated.
I stepped to the edge and jumped into the void.
The wind smacked hard against my body. My heart pounded. My eyes overflowed with tears. Exhilarating! I willed the web to appear once again and saw that the strands were guiding the wind in upward and downward currents. I needed to be lighter for the currents to hold my weight. I focused on the structure of my body and decreased my density. With this my frame became lighter and the effect of the wind increased. Now all I needed were a set of wings. I transformed the shape of my shirt and spread my arms and instantly I began gliding upon the wind with ease!
The young woman was quite a distance below me now so I put my hands to my sides and dropped like a bullet.
With a twist she turned and rode a current on her back. "I told you this was going to be fun!" she called. She caught an updraft and screamed with elation.
We glided back and forth a number of times, exchanging glances and smiles. I didn't know this young woman-- but somehow I felt a kinship with her. "I don't believe I've ever had this much fun!" I yelled above the wind. As I spoke the words a feeling passed over me. I was certain I had never allowed myself to be wild or impulsive. But with this young lady it was easy to let go. I felt the urge to laugh at the top of my lungs. So I did! The laughter was contagious and soon we were both twisting and laughing, gliding effortlessly through the night. I wanted this moment to go on forever. But all too soon I began to feel the misty salt air on my face. The lights below grew larger and brighter. As the ground drew nearer, the girl turned and headed toward a strip of beach near the village. I followed.
It wasn't the smoothest of landings. I hit the ground in a run which quickly transitioned into a series of sand flicking tumbles, ending up with me on my back, laughing.
The girl swooped in, rose up for a moment, then landed gently on both feet. Her smiling face appeared above me. "Are you hurt?"
"Just my pride." I laughed. "That was amazing!"
She giggled. "You will be long discovering the wonders of this place."
"Of that I have no doubt." I rolled over with a grunt and got to my feet, brushing sand as I went. I brought the web to life once again and molded my shirt to its original shape.
"You are making great progress," she said, smiling. "Come. I would like to show you my palace." Gently she took my hand into hers. We headed up the beach to a path leading to a brown needle road. Thousands of sparkling lights lined its edges.
Trinador was like nothing I had ever dreamed or imagined. Enormous trees had been painstakingly carved out into separate living units all the way up the majestic tree trunks to the delicate canopy of leaves overhead. Slanted wooden walkways provided easy access all the way up to the lofty penthouses. And rope bridges criss-crossed over the brown needle road. Glittering lamps hung everywhere, filling the village with a soft glow.
The workmanship surrounding us was extremely advanced. It would have taken hundreds of sculptors hundreds of years to create these wonderful works of art, yet the villagers appeared completely at ease moving among the fantastic architecture. I was awestruck.
"You made this?" I said, craning my neck."
Thunder rumbled in the distance, and the briefest look of concern crossed the girl’s features. Lightly she tugged on my arm. "Come. This way."
I gazed in wonder as she drew me along. There were no cars here, only sturdy horses and an occasional cart. As the villagers scurried about tending to their nightly routines, I noticed that the colors of their clothing matched the green and brown hues of their surroundings. Their expressions reflected a general look of contentment. They stopped and bowed slightly as we passed. I wondered if this was a standard greeting, or an acknowledgment of station. Either way, I decided to bow back. I did take note, however, that my companion did not.
An old man looked down at us from his second story stoop. He rocked back and forth and smiling a toothless grin. An unsettling feeling washed over me. He was out of place in this fantasy setting. The scenery around us was without blemish, oddly unaffected by age or weather, but this man had a measure of decay. I looked about. Where were the rotting logs and dead branches? Aside from this one old man the village was perfect-- too perfect to be real. We continued on.
We rounded a bend. Towering before us with majestic grace stood the palace in all its splendor. Carved out of a tree much larger than the rest, thick branches traveled off in all directions. Ornamental carvings wrapped around the trunk in fantastic designs. A set of polished stairs traveled deep into its heart.
The young lady dropped my hand and flashed a brilliant smile. "So, what do you think?" she said with her arms spread wide.
"It’s magnificent. You made all this?"
"Yes." She giggled.
"It must have taken forever!"
Her lovely eyes lit up. "It did take awhile, and I must admit my first few attempts were rather poor. But the villagers were very supportive."
"The villagers were here before you?"
She nodded. "I stumbled upon their village quite by accident one night. They were familiar with who I was, so I was treated like a queen. That is why I decided to stay. That, and the fact that they needed my protection from Rath, the..." Her jaw tightened and she leaned in close, "the nastiest, most vile, spoiled rotten little..."
There came another rumble from the sky and the villagers quickly retreated into every nook and knothole.
"Oh, now that hurts my feelings, young blood." A deep voice resonated across the open area. "How many times do I have to tell you, Kitaya, if you blaspheme my name, I will make things most difficult for you."
The voice unnerved me to my very core.
"Rath!" Kitaya clenched her delicate fingers into fists of rage. "Where are you? If you hurt my people, I will make you pay! I swear!"
"Easy, young one," the voice boomed out. "You might burst a vessel in your head. Then where would you be?" I looked up to see a giant disembodied head filling the sky. It was aglow, and there was a twisted smile upon it. "Who’s your friend, strumpet?" The voice dripped with arrogance. "He doesn’t look like much from up here."
I felt a presence breeze by my shoulder, and turned to see a man whose face matched the image in the sky. Instinctively I looked back up. And immediately regretted it. A hand grabbed my throat and my back slammed hard against the matted ground. Rath hovered above me, his hand still on my throat.
"Leave him alone!" Kitaya screamed.
"If you do not interfere, little one, I’ll stop the games for a bit," he stated smoothly, never taking his eyes off mine. I reached up to pry his hand free from my neck-- but his strength was enormous. "You’re not going to give me any trouble, are you, newbie?" He smirked, re-emphasizing his hold on my neck. "I am the ultimate ruler of this world. If you resist me, you will die. That is rule number one." He released his grip and moved away.
I caught my breath and arose cautiously, eying him in case of further attack. I tried to take a non-threatening stance, so as not to invoke any further hostility to my neck. Or any other part of my body for that matter.
He paced back and forth with hands on his hips, an ominous figure of a man, yet unnaturally charismatic. He wore a strange suit of black and red rubber armor. His curly blond hair rested against his padded shoulders. And a scar ran diagonally across his right cheek. His eyes, like mine, were blue metal spheres. Cold and lifeless.
"Conspiracy!" he said, glaring at me and pushing his finger toward the sky. "You, with us no more than an hour and you’re already conspiring against me!
"Y- You must be mistaken."    
"Silence!" He drew up his shoulders. "I will not be made a fool! I know conspiracy when I see it!"
"You see conspiracy in everything, Rath!" Kitaya yelled. "All we want is to be left alone!"
 He snapped around to face the girl. "Then why is it your troops stand on my border this very minute prepared for invasion?"
She stared at him in disbelief. "They are not there to invade! It is a defensive line. And it would not be there if you would stop your silly games!" Her lovely almond shaped eyes glared at him.
"Oh," he said unexpectedly, his expression taking on an air of sudden understanding. "My apologies young lady, my mistake," he said insincerely.
A horse materialized beside him and in one motion he spun and lifted himself onto its back. His cold eyes met mine as he leaned forward in the saddle. "I’ll be watching this one," he stated with finality. The horse bolted off leaving a flurry of needles in its wake.
We watched until he was out of sight. "Wow," I said, beating at my clothing to get the needles off. "That’s the second time I’ve been accosted since I arrived."
Kitaya shook her head. "It is always something new with him."
"So what do I do now?" I asked, feeling a renewed concern for my safety.
Kitaya looked up at me with a sullenness unbecoming of her beautiful face, and said, "Practice."

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